If you
think your writing can save the world, please think again. I really don't believe any one person
is up to that job, not even a Write 'em Cowgirl. I think it would take a massive change of heart and outlook
on the parts of billions of people to do that. If you set your heart on saving the world by means of your
own writing, you are likely to get it smashed to bits (or get yourself martyred
for little gain).
Image © Sharon Cousins 2009
Every act, every word, sends ripples into a larger world.
Changing
the world, on the other hand, is something we all achieve every day. People, animals… even butterflies
change the world, whether in small ways or ways that become greater than they
can know. Some of you may have a
goal of trying to change the world for the better with your writing while
others may just want to write great stories or articles because you enjoy it or
want to sell your writing and share your creativity through writing. There's nothing wrong with any of those
goals, but I think it's good to recognize that whatever the purpose of your
writing, it will
change the world, so even if that's not on your goal list it's good to think
about the effects of what you put out.
If your goal is to write successfully for positive social or
political or environmental (or whatever) change, then you need to be smart and really take a
look at what actually works for reaching people. FEW PEOPLE ENJOY GETTING BEATEN ABOUT THE HEAD AND SHOULDERS
WITH SOMEONE ELSE'S IDEALISM!!!
Maybe you do know more about your subject than your readers, but if you
don't connect what you know with what they do know and credit them with some intelligence,
you will come across as a smarty-pants know-it-all, which is likely to be
counter-productive.
At least some of you have
probably read the novel Dune, by Frank Herbert.
In Dune,
there is quite a bit of one-on-one close-up fighting. The fighters use a device that provides an invisible shield
that stops anything moving quickly from penetrating. They fight hard and fast, but the coup de grace has to slip
in slowly and gracefully. It is
easier to slip new ideas to people gently than to bully or badger or rant them
into looking at your ideas.
Mr. Diassana, in addition to being an artist, is busy with his project, Sun for All, which works to design, build, and distribute solar cookers adapted for Mali and made from locally available materials. Micro-loan programs help make cookers accesible to those who most need them. This man works every day to avert the grim future shown in his painting. Mr. Diassana is the recipient of the 2006 Ashden Award for Sustainable Energy.
You may be angry with some (or
a lot) of what is happening in the world.
I wouldn't blame you if you were, but if you put out anger, the most
likely result is resistance. Try
to funnel that anger into something that will make things better, not something
that may let you blow off a little steam while actually setting up so much
resistance it makes things worse.
If you need to do an anger dump, use your journal (or possibly a rants
forum where everyone knows you're mostly letting off excess steam). Then get back to looking at what
actually works
for reaching people in a way that encourages them to listen.
In June of 2008, I had the
great good fortune to attend the first part of Anya Achtenberg's "Writing for Social Change"
workshop series, "Re-dream
a Just World", at the annual IWWG Conference. As Anya said one day in class, "Language is the most collective thing that we have."
In a sense, every story or article
or poem creates a community, because that piece enters the collective
consciousness of everyone who reads it, linking them whether they know it or
not. You may be writing for a
particular community (aka "market" in some contexts), but you are
also creating community as you go.
What kind of community of collective consciousness will your writing
create?
Two good questions from Anya's
workshop were:
"What is at stake when
you write?"
"What do you hold on to
when you write?"
Whether you are attempting to
write directly for change or trying to write because you hope to write great
fiction or non-fiction and support yourself writing or points beyond and
between, questions such as these three are worthy of consideration for every
writer from time to time. Honest
answers can deepen your craft, your commitment to your writing, and your
connection to your muse. Try a
freewrite on each of these questions.
There are many ways to use
writing as a tool of change. You
do not have to write a treatise or manifesto to change the world in a positive
way. Let's take an imaginary Write
'em Cowgirl, Kate. Kate is in high
school and writes for her school paper.
Kate works hard to write a short, punchy article presenting some good
reasons not to drink and drive (or a funny short story about a date gone sour
because of ending up in a muddy ditch that has the same effect). Another student thinks of the article
the following Saturday night and decides to call for a ride instead of driving
after a couple of beers. Now, what
if a man who would have discovered a cure for some dread disease or some useful
new invention if he had lived is driving the car that student would otherwise
have hit? Well, you get my drift. Small seeds can bear big fruit.
Image © Sharon Cousins 2009
Don't be constrained by presumptions or assumptions of convention—burst free and rise beyond the mold!
Don't feel that you can
"only" effect change through, say, op-ed pieces and letters to
officials. If what you are really
drawn to is travel essays, find a way to do it there. Write pieces that make other places and people more real and
more understandable to the people who read them to help wear away the us/them
mindset that plagues this world.
Write pieces that can show (without preaching—paint a word-picture that
helps people draw their own conclusions) the difference between an area that is
eroding due to deforestation or otherwise being damaged by humans and one that
is not. Take people to the
beautiful places we still have left and make them so real that people can see
for themselves why we should save what few we still have. When you visit a new place to collect
material for articles, explore (with attention to safety and sensibility) some
places that are off the beaten track of tourist attractions and shopping
districts, places where the everyday people live.
Informational articles,
personal essays, travel essays (especially those that really help people get
inside part of another culture or place), short stories or novels (but not by
making them preachy or pontifical!) op-ed pieces, some kinds of memoir, how-to
articles, letters, speeches… the list of kinds of writing that can and do
change the world in positive ways is almost endless. Even diaries.
Consider the impact of Anne Frank's on the hearts of the millions of
people who have read it. One
little girl takes the trouble to put pen to paper and over half a century
later, millions of people are inspired by her thoughts. I know I'm a better person because of
reading Anne Frank, and I am far from alone.
A simple, well written
article or story that takes into account how to attract and hold the interest
of its target audience can often do a great deal more good than reams of rants
or pontifications or sermons or catalogues of screaming horrors or (perhaps the
worst, if your goal is to be effective), long and poorly organized rambles that
never quite get to a point.
Getting someone to ask one good question or question one assumption
accomplishes more than getting dozens to mindlessly chant or display slogans
(though good slogans do have their place). Present your facts or your story in a way that encourages
people to think,
to make the connections themselves and draw their own conclusions. If you treat your readers like
intelligent people, at least some will respond accordingly, and a conclusion
one has drawn for oneself goes much deeper than hearing someone else's
conclusion.
Some of us like writing
in a variety of styles or genres while some of us have a strong pull to one or
two. If you are one of the latter,
you do not have to force yourself into a style or genre that doesn't fit to
effect positive change in your community or the world.
Image from "Hunted Like
Animals", used by permission of award-winning filmmaker Rebecca Sommer, who tells the following story:
This image shows a Hmong
Lao refugee girl, who was held in
a crowded detention cell without daylight for over two years. When she and her parents fled from Laos
to Thailand, Thai authorities arrested them. Other countries offered to resettle them, but Thailand
announced that they would be forced to return to Laos, the place from which
they had fled to escape persecution.
View clips from this
award winning documentary in Quicktime or see
them at You Tube. There are clips from some of her other
films, too. She does beautiful
work.
Terrible things happen
on this planet each day. If you
are one of those writers drawn to take on these things, you are tackling a
tough job. You may be asking people
to confront the unspeakable, the unimaginable, the unthinkable. If people turn away from your words in
rage or nauseated disgust or dismay, they will not have the opportunity to take
in your ideas or the story you are trying to tell them. How do we write the unspeakable so that
people can listen? In a maelstrom
of cruelty and injustice, can we become the eye of the hurricane or the calm
before the storm? We don't want to sugar-coat the cruelty and injustice, but a
calm and reasoning tone is more likely to be listened to than a rant.
If change writing is
important to you, you will do yourself a huge favor if you can manage to take Anya
Achtenberg's "Writing for Social Change",
a three-part workshop that explores many issues of effective change
writing. I've been through the
first part, "Re-dream a Just World," and I'm hoping to make the big International
Women's Writing Guild conference in June to start the second part, "Place and
Exile; Borders and Crossings."
Anya teaches this workshop (and others that sound interesting … Anya is
a fantastic teacher) in the Twin Cities of Minneapolis and St. Paul,
Minnesota. She travels to teach in
other places where there is a demand for her workshops. If you have a large enough pool of
interest in your writing community, contact
Anya about the possibility of bringing her to your
community or conference for a workshop.
In addition to a offering number of group workshops, Anya's services for
individual writers include manuscript consultations, coaching sessions, and
one-on-one instruction, which can be done over the Internet when needed. I hold this incredible writer, woman,
and teacher in very high regard.
If you really want to write for change in a powerful way and feel your
writing needs a boost, you could not to better than to study with or get some
coaching from this powerful woman and fine teacher.
Mary Reynolds Thompson, CPCC, CAPF, is a change writer and writing
coach (among other things.. I wouldn't dream of limiting Mary!). She is a fabulous blend of grounded and
high-powered and leads a heck of a workshop—a real write 'em cowgirl. I have attended two of Mary's
workshops, "Writing From the Root Voice" (2007) and "Dangerous
Voices," at the spring VoicesConference
of the IWWG,
held each March in the redwoods near Santa Cruz, Ca. Mary is an inspiring and energizing teacher—even a few hours
of work-shopping with her helped my writing in a way I still feel. Her change writing currently centers
around the website for her upcoming book, Awakening the
Eco-Soul.
It is lovely site with much inspiration as well as food for thought and
concern, and I highly recommend Mary's short, free monthly e-newsletter—there's
a sign-up box on every page of her Eco-Soul site. It's like a breath of fresh air in my email box.
In her role as writing
coach and teacher, Mary Reynolds Thompson is the founder of Write the Damned
Book, offering everything from workshops to coaching sessions to help
writers get the job done and done well.
I highly recommend Mary as a teacher and coach, as well as a source of
environmental inspiration.
I am finishing my first
read-through of Writing
to Change the World by Mary Pipher, PhD. Dr. Pipher holds a BA in cultural
anthropology and a PhD in clinical psychology and puts both areas of expertise
to good use in writing this book.
She draws some interesting parallels between the role of a change writer
and the role of a psychologist, and I think she has some good insights on
writing so people can listen. I
also liked that she was willing to use examples of her own work in at least one
or two places to illustrate how not to do it. She learned from her mistakes and generously offers us the
opportunity to do likewise. There
is some good advice on writing and writing processes (including revision) and
the psychology of change and of writing for change. There are also short specific chapters for some categories
that are typically thought of as change writing: Letters, Speeches, Personal
Essays, Blogs, and Music and Poetry.
I think this book would be useful to a lot of writers who want to make a
point of writing for change.
For change writing, as
for any type of creative prose, Susan M. Tiberghien's book, One Year to a
Writing Life — Twelve Lessons to Deepen Every Writer's Craft
has my vote for best broad-spectrum writing book you could own. If you want your prose to be deeper and
richer and clearer, Susan's book may well help you get there (especially if you
take it seriously and do the exercises).
The chapters on Opinion and Travel Essays, Personal Essays, and Poetic
Prose and the Prose Poem might be of particular interest to change writers, but
the whole book is very worthwhile.
If you ever have an opportunity to attend one of Susan's workshops, jump at the chance. She is a first-rate teacher up close and personal, whichever
of her workshops she is teaching, but if you can't have that, be grateful the
book exists (especially if you do the exercises!).
If you are going to get
either book, please order it from an independent bookseller if you possibly
can, so more stores will get a chance for a look at it. Remember, we vote with every dollar we
spend, especially now when times are tough and likely to get tougher. My indie, Bookpeople
of Moscow, carries Susan's book sometimes, partly because
of me ordering and recommending it, and I know others have bought copies
there. This one needs to get out
where more people will see it, so let's do what we can to get it into
bookstores where folks can find it.
The more money we spend locally, the better off our own communities will
be in these hard times, and in my experience, indies do more to support,
encourage, and promote writers than any other type of book marketer.
If you know of other
resources—books, forums, websites, teachers, or whatever—that you think are
especially useful for change-focused writing, please drop me a line and tell me
enough about the resource to convince me that you believe it (don't just tell
me it's great, give me some of the why) and I'll see about including it on this
site or in the Write
'em Cowgirls Express.